9/25 – Last day Fiction Writing

Today we talked about common mistakes in dialogue using this fabulous article from The Creative Penn. Then we wrote and conferenced for the remainder of the period.

Fiction DUE today! I will print it at the beginning of fourth period. If you think your work is not complete, that’s fine–you’re welcome to put a note at the top of your page identifying the main thing you’re concerned about or thinking about so that you can get feedback on it in workshop, for example:

  • I was in line to conference with Mrs. B about the dialogue in the middle section, which I think is a bit weak, but I didn’t get signed up in time. Any feedback on that is much appreciated!
  • I wrote an awesome beginning as well as the ending, but I totally left out the middle. I’m not sure what needs to happen to get from the start to the finish. I’d love to get feedback on that in workshop.
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